tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1423541130735813573.post9213985769996739412..comments2023-05-28T00:12:05.499+12:00Comments on Toby @ Pt England School: Narrative MythPES Blogs Admin 2015http://www.blogger.com/profile/00718590749281782598noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1423541130735813573.post-32486953876153613482020-08-17T17:11:48.231+12:002020-08-17T17:11:48.231+12:00 solid piece of writing Toby - your tone and choic... solid piece of writing Toby - your tone and choice of phrases and character names is believable in the context you have conjured up - well done! I would love to see your PART 1 edited for vocabulary choices AND punctuation. What fate awaits Olgrim, Thaddeus and Rud?Ms. Tapukehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05373283988498623194noreply@blogger.com