After waiting in the crowded line, It was finally my turn. I got everything on and was ready to go. I looked down at the monstrosity, I was too frightened to go. Well, I had to. The person shouted at me “Is something wrong!!.”
“No” I shouted back.
I took 3 deep breaths and jumped, As I jumped onto the frightening Blob, I whispered to myself “I am scared”. Walking across the blue, yellow and red Blob, I waited and waited. Suddenly I launched through the air. I flipped and twisted until finally I landed head first into the water.
I’m cold” I said with my teeth chattering. I quickly ran to get my towel. Luckily for me the sun was boiling hot so I was warm and dry before I knew it. When I got back on the wooden wharf to grab my towel ,everyone was asking questions “Did it hurt?” I heard from one person. It was so annoying so I had to run home.
As I was running Home I thought of never doing it again. When I got home I was bursting for water and skulled the drink.
I'm loving your giant sized muscles Toby!
ReplyDeleteWell done on getting almost all of your punctuation spot on - almost.
Your ideas are fantastic and the way that you have described all the exciting moments is brilliant. Magic job on this task Toby.
Hi Toby,
ReplyDeleteI really loved your descriptions... "monstrosity", "flipped and twisted", "chattering" - I've never been on a Blob before, but I feel like I can really imagine the motion.
I, too, loved your bulging muscles and awesome "six pack" abs!
Well done,
Love Mum