Extension Rubric Mark Term 2

My Marks for Term 2 were better than I thought. I got 27 points out of 30, that’s really good. I am feeling amazing because in Term 1 I only got 17 points which is still good it’s just this time I got 10 points more.

What I need to work on is contributing more in the Paideia Seminar, talking more and share more research and be confident to get better. How I got the marks was doing heaps of research, performed well, good drawing, and really good co-operation. Mrs Lagitupu and Mrs Sinclair helped us heaps and our group that we’re working with!

How Raindrops Meet Each Other

It all starts off in a lake or a puddle or a pool anywhere that has water and where water can survive!

Me and my friends are together now but hours later, we’re gone. Vanished into the sky only to be lost to the clouds!

At first you feel weird for your first time but as the longer you stay the more confident it gets!

One day me and my friends were in the clouds for 5 years already waiting to go down back to our home but not until the god of the water and clouds set us free.

How you get down there you have to prove that you're worthy and responsible and perfect which is hard!

It took me awhile to get down here but while I was up there all my friends had gone down here I was the last one, the water and cloud god was sad that I didn’t have anyone to play with so he sent me down, and I saw my friends. Ever since that day I have loved that god!

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Guardians of the Galaxy - Narrative Writing

Start your writing here:

A Farmer named Billy Stevens & his brother named Owen Stevens!

Where the story is set:

Before: Earth, Peaceful, plants growing, fresh air, Grass covering the dirt!

After: Earth, solid rock spreading, nothing growing, Core split in two!

The Problems:

A Drilling company are drilling the Earth with a drilling machine the person had orders to drill until reaching the core of the earth, he reaches the edge of the dirt and stops. He waits for his fuel to refill then the drilling machine starts rumbling and the drilling machine tears the core in two parts, the earth starts to rot and all the dirt and grass quickly turns into stone and the people have to get off the planet before they turn into stone!

They build a spaceship then head out to find a new planet but get troubled by asteroids!

My Orientation:

Billy Stevens and his brother Owen Stevens are in space with the town people behind them, they all built the same spaceship with different colors to show who’s is who’s. They are choosing a planet to live on and they pick Venus a safe planet with no life forms, this event happened 37 years ago!

What about the Problem:

When they head out of Earth and their in space they get troubled by millions and millions of humongous asteroids!

What happens first of all:

A Drilling company are drilling the Earth with a drilling machine the person had orders to drill until reaching the core of the earth, he reaches the edge of the dirt and stops. He waits for his fuel to refill then the drilling machine starts rumbling and the drilling machine tears the core in two parts, the earth starts to rot and all the dirt and grass quickly turns into stone and the people have to get off the planet before they turn into stone!

What happens next:

Billy Stevens and his brother Owen Stevens build a spaceship then Billy Stevens and his brother head off in their own spaceship, floating in space!

The End:

They live happy at their new home!

The problem is sorted out because they have found a new planet to live on, not a stone one! And by dodging asteroids!