I am a Year 5 learner in rooms 9 and 10 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teachers are Mrs Buchanan and Miss West.
Just Relaxing two on my bed with my bothers Chromebook
Hi Toby,You look very relaxed! I hope that you woke up in time to finish watching the movie. I have to admit that I often fall asleep when watching movies or television shows late at night. My family teases me about it all the time!Do you normally fall asleep when you watch movies?Cheers,Rachel :)
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Hi toby, i really like your relaxing photo. It reminds me of when i went to the movies and i was just relaxing and watching the movie. Have u thought about putting more detail in your work like who took the photo because it looks like you are sleeping so i have NO idea if you took the photo or maybe someone else took the photo and think about what was challenging about taking the photo, how long did it take? How many shots did you have to take to make the photo perfect? What movie were u watching. Add more detail to make people think ¨WOW!, what is this about?¨ They might even leave a positive, thoughtful and a helpful comment.If you would like to see my blog or my class blog, it is http://wpsjohnp.blogspot.co.nz - http://wpsmargetts.blogspot.co.nz/