Bad Voice Recording:
Punching a bunch of red poppies Abigail sat on the rickety Moss covered bench beneath the tree with it's black not at branches to sit together like a plant snow falling about her and it felt in a strange way as if she had never been there before but of course she had the first time sheet into the silver in Kingdom at been to remove the poisonous Bell Post between the words and this pants and spell story sick and had been to 3 braggan so I'm fine thereby saving the ice dragons from Extinction which allowed that starts and it's true and happy ending.
Fix Up Version:
Clutching a bunch of red poppies, Abigail sat on the rickety, moss-covered bench beneath the tree with it's black knotted branches twisted together like a plait, snow falling about her. It felt, in a strange way, as if she had never been there before. But of course she had. The first time had entered the Silver Kingdom had been to remove the poisonous spell placed between the words in the Sanspell story. The second had been to free Bragonsthyme, thereby saving the ice dragons from extinction, which allowed that story to have it's true and happy ending.
Task Description:
This week we were given our new Duffy books, we had to complete a task which is where we read the book and record it and in the other version is what it actually says!
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