Walt: Follow the structure of a narrative
Task Description:
This week we learnt how to properly write narratives and even understand them by use of a story mountain, I found the story mountain easy to understand and I know recognise it as a great tool for writing narratives.
Hi Toby,
ReplyDeleteYou totally understood the story and the main ideas within it. Can you imagine a world where you are punished for being too intelligent? It is a great idea for a story though.
Hi Toby. I REALLY like your description of a narrative. I find it very clear and easy to read. I also like how you added some color and a few videos, it made it more interesting. Maybe next time you could just go over it and add some punctuation on slide two and go over your blub on the post before you post it. Apart from that I think this is a great piece.
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Here is a link to my blog if you would like a look:
https://stpatricksgmpyperm.blogspot.com/
Thanks but I only wrote the last page, It was my teacher mrs stone who prepared the slide for us to edit. But thanks for the advice.
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