solid piece of writing Toby - your tone and choice of phrases and character names is believable in the context you have conjured up - well done! I would love to see your PART 1 edited for vocabulary choices AND punctuation. What fate awaits Olgrim, Thaddeus and Rud?
solid piece of writing Toby - your tone and choice of phrases and character names is believable in the context you have conjured up - well done! I would love to see your PART 1 edited for vocabulary choices AND punctuation. What fate awaits Olgrim, Thaddeus and Rud?
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