I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ.
Kia ora Toby,It is great to see some different perspectives of the event. These wahine have had a similar experience to most of us during the cupcake theft - they did not see the cannon fire (or the cupcake disappear), but the aftermath of the event
Hi my name is Bayley I am from stpatricks school greymouth i think this is a good story but there is some mistakes with your spelling.
Hi my name is lawrence, I'm from stpatricks school. I think your work and story is really nice but the only downside is your spelling.
Meant mistakes from your spelling
Kia ora Toby,
ReplyDeleteIt is great to see some different perspectives of the event. These wahine have had a similar experience to most of us during the cupcake theft - they did not see the cannon fire (or the cupcake disappear), but the aftermath of the event
Hi my name is Bayley I am from stpatricks school greymouth i think this is a good story but there is some mistakes with your spelling.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is lawrence, I'm from stpatricks school. I think your work and story is really nice but the only downside is your spelling.
ReplyDeleteMeant mistakes from your spelling
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