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Showing posts with label Writing 2019. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing 2019. Show all posts

Friday, 6 December 2019

An Intro To Static Image

Walt: Identify how verbal & visual features combine to convey mood

Task Description:
This week we had to described images and view images while we had to say what picture reminded us of anything. I found it easy!

Thursday, 21 November 2019

Toby Using Images - Six Sentences Long

Walt: Create a narrative (based on an image)


Task Description:
This week we had to write the same narrative but in only six sentences. I found it easy!

Tuesday, 12 November 2019

Narrative Writing 2 - Based On Picture

Walt: Create a narrative (based on an image)


Task Description:
This week me and AJ collaborated to create a narrative based on a picture. We found it easy and quick. Hope you enjoy our story.

Monday, 4 November 2019

Narrative Writing

Walt: Create a Narrative


Task Description:
This week we had to create a narritive of any genre. I chose none of them, I decided to write about my partner named AJ. We were just simply writing what came to our heads. Check out each of our story's. I found it easy!

Thursday, 17 October 2019

How To Be An Effective Leader

Walt: Identify & use features of explanation writing


Task Description:
This week we had to explain and give tips on how to be an effective leader. I found it easy!

Friday, 20 September 2019

Persuasive Writing

Walt: Use persuasive language


Task Description:
This week we had to write based on a topic to persuade our readers. I found it easy.

Friday, 6 September 2019

Persuasive Writing

Walt: Use persuasive language


Task Description:
This week we had to complete another topic - Should zoos be banned? and use persuasive language to describe our opinion on this topic. I found it easy!

Wednesday, 28 August 2019

Persuasive Writing

Walt: Use persuasive language


Task Descritpion:
This week we had to write a persuasive text to convince our readers to agree with our point of view. We were writing about - what are the benefits of being the youngest sibling.

Tuesday, 20 August 2019

Persuasive Writing

Walt: Use facts and personal experiences to support position


Task Description:
This week we had to use pros and cons to decide whether learning and knowing diffent languages was a good or bad thing, I also had to express my opinion on whether I thought it was good or not. I found it easy!

Friday, 16 August 2019

De-extinction - Writing Task

Walt: Express an opinion on a topic



Task Description:
This week we had to share our opinion on a specific topic to try persuade others to our own opinion. I found it easy!

Tuesday, 30 July 2019

What's Alive?

Walt: Write for a specific purpose


Task Description:

This week we had to test an object to see if it was alive mine wasn't, I chose a chair and tested it to see if it was alive. I found it fun!

Wednesday, 24 July 2019

Guinness World Records

Walt: Write for a specific audience


Task Description:
This week we had to try our best by attempting to break a Guinness World Record by doing some of the challenges in our class. I found it fun!

Monday, 1 July 2019

Plastics Free July 2019

Walt: Write for a specific purpose


Task Description:
This week we had to write about plastic free pollution day/month and create a piece of descriptive writing to explain what it is and it'es reason! I found it easy!

Monday, 17 June 2019

Fractured Fairytale Introductions

Little Red Riding Hood Intro: It was late morning when Emma awoke from her deep sleep. She felt a cold chill as she pulled the duvet covers off her and laid them aside, she finally opened her eyes as she blinked through the bright light of the sun beaming through her windows around her plain red room. 

Three Little Pigs: “I'm sorry but it is time for you to go off into the world and live by yourself, maybe even find a girl, oh but watch out for that big bad wolf, best to make houses out of either Straw, Sticks or Bricks might be best” Mummy Pig said.

Aladdin: “How would you like a grand tour on the Magic Carpet?”

Biography - Greta Thunberg

Walt: Use a graphic organiser to plan our writing


Task Description:
This week we had to take notes from the video and put them into a graphic organiser. I found it easy!

Tuesday, 28 May 2019

Informational Writing

Walt: Craft well-built sentences


Task Description:
This week my classmates and I completed a presentation based on Inforative Writing. We had to analyse and describe our paragraphs that we wrote ourselves. Check out my presentation to find out more!

Tuesday, 14 May 2019

What Is A Fractured Fairy Tale?

Walt: Write Fractured Fairytales


Task Description:
This week wehad to write our own fractured fairy tale, I decided to fracture the story of Little Red Riding Hood. I enjoyed making this.

Monday, 6 May 2019

Fairy Tales

Walt: Use striking words & phrases in sentences


Task Description:
Write a letter that uses descriptive words to it! I found it easy!

Monday, 29 April 2019

Fairy Tale Introduction - Goldilocks & The Three Bears

Different Introductions to begin a story:
It was a late morning
I awoke once the sun touched my eyes
I yawned as I got out of my bed duvets


It was late morning when the two bears awoke from their deep sleep through the cold night.
They both shivered to drain out the coldness from their body’s and rubbed their fur to flood
their bodies with warmness once again.
As soon as they all stumbled down the stairs, they could smell a light scent that smells
delicious, but then it disappeared in the morning air, they searched for it again, they didn’t
find it, but once the smell came past them again like a current that’s drifts things out to sea.
They were sure of where it was coming from… downstairs!
They both rushed down the stairs and followed the scent to the kitchen where Mama bear
was cooking her delicious porridge recipe and an immense grin appeared on their faces!

Immersion Assembly Term 2 2019

On a late morning we began our first day of school for Term 2. To be honest as usual,
everyone was bored and tired and each of us dearly missed the holidays and the sleep-in
and well, being free from the pressure and tension that school can bring when you are
caught up with a bunch of work! From now on till 9 weeks is past we will be following
the new and improved overall korero of the term… “I Like Your Latitude” and “Where In
The Longitude Are You?”.


Today’s day also brought along the long and kinda cool Immersion Assembly when our
teachers provide us with a video or a live short performance or even just a talk that explains
to us what each team is learning while the term lasts. I’m in Team 5, the cool team.
Obviously I mostly interacted with Team 5’s performance with how smart their storyline
was and how funny it was and how they actually used basic “longitude” and “latitude”.


To be honest I didn’t interact well with Team 1’s performance. As always they made a
movie like always and tried to make it funny by making their voices high-pitched which
people did giggle when the time came, well even I did! Their main goal was to create a
movie about how bees are dying and what is causing this disruption to the earth. I’ve got
to say they didn’t really base it on the main topic (“Longitude” and ”Latitude”) because
they didn’t really use coordination and other things that relate to that!


Team 2 didn’t really perform. What actually happened was the teachers just set up an
easter egg hunt by hiding several eggs everywhere and instructing the kids with a learning
lesson and continuously repeating actions that went in an order like this (Up, down, left,
right, under, over, all around). I was surprised to see that this tactic worked as they sprinted
around repeating action after action and somehow finding an immense packload full of
easter eggs.


Team 3 actually did pretty darn’ well with their movie. They made their movie that was
based on a “Pick A Path Story”. They had a great storyline to it and most importantly,
they based on a person who was bored when she walked to school and somehow a magical
witch showed up and let her choose what she where she wanted to go to travel to school,
she had two options:


  1. Forest
  2. Beach


At first she chose forest and had a splendid time but the she came across the magical witch
again with the same choices, this time she chose beach and had a wonderful time
wandering in the dry tanned sand. Sooner or later she finally made it to school with a grin
on her face!


Team 4 also did pretty darn’ well, well they always think of good movies to show what
their learning and also they make it really funny. Their movie was about how a teacher
calls a meeting for the other teachers to join him, but when they got there they were
surprised to see no Mr Goodwin as they wondered this, a frown formed on each of their
faces. After a while a phone call appeared on Miss Parrants phone and they were mad to
see who‘s name was at the top… Mr Goodwin! Once he appeared he started right away
“Hello teachers” he said “I have set a test for you” “you must follow the map and compass
that I will send you to find your way to our meeting at Pt England School, bye”. Once they
found the compass they set off around Glen Innes following which direction is best, as
normal they took regular stops to bakery’s and dairy’s just to gather provisions/food and
maybe a little snack.

I think you already know team 5’s item so i’m not gonna bore you to death!