Walt: Consider how our words, line length and rythym affect our writing
Task Description: Today me and a couple of friends wrote a poem based on Sour Patch Lollies. We were forced to use big words to explain our thinking. I found it hard!
It is hard having to write a poem with so few words - it would be much easier to write a free-verse poem with longer lines! However, as you say it did force you to use precise vocab and your poem is excellent. I love the exaggeration (life changing experience) and your last line is my favourite - it is very funny.
Hi Toby,
ReplyDeleteIt is hard having to write a poem with so few words - it would be much easier to write a free-verse poem with longer lines! However, as you say it did force you to use precise vocab and your poem is excellent. I love the exaggeration (life changing experience) and your last line is my favourite - it is very funny.